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« Thread Started on Nov 7, 2009, 9:26am » | |
a thin
purple thread
runs through
each being
through
each creature
each plant
the air
the stones
the fabric
of the universe
tug it
all existence
moves
break it
the cosmos
unravels
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« Reply #2 on Nov 8, 2009, 12:31am » | |
Super work here, filled with thought!
Yes it is so very true, if everyone would just understand this huh?
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