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 Ruby Red Love
« Thread Started on Nov 6, 2009, 8:38am »





Be mine in ruby red
that's what the teddy bear said
with a crystal ruby right in the heart
where all love is supposed to start.

I know that love starts in your mind
It signals with the very first sign
endorphins run freely among many things
the main one of course is your brain.

Love then comes from within you soul
chasing away once what was cold
warming your insides like a cup of hot tea
that's love, what it means to me.

Be mine in ruby red
that's what my teddy bear saids
I just look at him and smile
just staring at him for a little while.

Debbie Wagoner 8/14/09



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« Reply #1 on Nov 7, 2009, 4:38am »

A really lovely poem Deb.
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« Reply #2 on Nov 9, 2009, 4:30pm »

SWEET!!! Debbie, You have a wonderful romantic heart. I love this and the picture, too. Well done. Take care.

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Love then comes from within your soul
chasing away once what was cold
warming your insides like a cup of hot tea
that's love, what it means to me.

Hi, Debbie :)
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Excellent writing!
A joy reading
Thank you for sharing.

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