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« Thread Started on Nov 6, 2009, 10:24am »

Every dream, drenched me in tears.
Sighs of separation has taken away my soul.
Train of doubts will not dissolve.
Rain of drops salty will not stop.
Pardon for any injurious talk.
Sighs of separation has taken away my soul.
Face smiling can not remain away.
Searched every corner and way.
Eyes can not forget laugh pearly .
Sighs of separation has taken away my soul.
Never thought , will be cruel to core.
Fly away you will, after snatching my heart.
I got caught by mirage.
Every talk, soaked me in tears.
Sighs of separation has robbed my soul.
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« Reply #1 on Nov 7, 2009, 4:43am »

Attar,
a well written verse but so sad my friend.
I hope that you are ok??

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« Reply #2 on Nov 12, 2009, 2:52am »

An excellent write here - Attar :)

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Keep up the good work - A pleasure reading
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« Reply #3 on Nov 12, 2009, 6:27am »

Helo Shelby!


Tried just mood shade change .

Rest all fine .

Thanks a lot .

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