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Love Story (November 2009)
« Thread Started on Nov 7, 2009, 8:12am »
Do you remember
the silky sands of Juhu beach,
where we heard song of the whispering winds
and melancholy melody of the watery waves.

The day we had come close, closer and closer -
till your minty breath had mingled with mine!
Do you recollect that cold night of rhapsody
when I had accepted the silent invitation of your fiery arms
and later midst the damp satin sheets –
that musky fragrance lingered
that was neither your nor mine,
but it was of the infinite unison of our bodies and souls…

Now, when I think of those golden old days
we spent together,
my eyes blur with salty saline-water
and clandestinely I count the teardrops
that fall on the sultry pages of
our forgotten love story…

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« Reply #1 on Nov 7, 2009, 8:44pm »
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Re: Love Story (November 2009)
« Reply #2 on Nov 8, 2009, 12:18am »
Enjoyed this write - Bharat :)

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Keep up the good work - A pleasure reading

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Re: Love Story (November 2009)
« Reply #3 on Nov 8, 2009, 6:56am »
Dear Steve and Miss Laraine,
I'm glad that you liked the write!

Good Day!!!
BHARAT ::)
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